the description matches the photos. Over all I think the pictures are really cool ad nice. The best one I think is the grass one. I think the not so good one is the last one. is it a mirror or and a table? You might want to not make some of the photos so grainy. good job tho!
The description matches the photos. I think it turned out well. My favorite is the photo of the leaf because the shallow depth of field creates some bokeh in the background. My least favorite is the last one because the water drops don’t stand out as much on that texture. I think your concentration could be made better overall if the focus was a little sharper in some of the pictures, especially the grass picture because it’s a little bit grainy. Good job overall!
so your mini concentration looks great.!! your description matches it very well. my favorite picture is probably the leaf because i like how its just not a green leaf but it has something to it like the burnt looking edges and the droplets look great. my least favorite is the last and first one. i dont really know what they're like is it a window? or the ground.? maybe use a different object. but it looks great tho.
I like the series of water drops. my favorite photo is the big leaf. The grass photo turned out kind of blurry. Good job, i really like the focus on the water.
I really like the way that the pictures look. The water droplets look really cool against the apple and i like how you used macro to get the perfect picture. The quality of the pictures look really good too. My favorite picture was the one of the apple because i really liked the colors and the way that the water looked on the apple. I thought the black background looked really good too!
What is the visual idea? you need to be able to describe your concentration with terms that relate to visual ideas. The photos are well composed and work well, but you didn't take any risks with the photos. 40/50
the description matches the photos. Over all I think the pictures are really cool ad nice. The best one I think is the grass one. I think the not so good one is the last one. is it a mirror or and a table? You might want to not make some of the photos so grainy. good job tho!
ReplyDeleteThe description matches the photos. I think it turned out well. My favorite is the photo of the leaf because the shallow depth of field creates some bokeh in the background. My least favorite is the last one because the water drops don’t stand out as much on that texture. I think your concentration could be made better overall if the focus was a little sharper in some of the pictures, especially the grass picture because it’s a little bit grainy. Good job overall!
ReplyDeleteso your mini concentration looks great.!! your description matches it very well.
ReplyDeletemy favorite picture is probably the leaf because i like how its just not a green leaf but it has something to it like the burnt looking edges and the droplets look great. my least favorite is the last and first one. i dont really know what they're like is it a window? or the ground.? maybe use a different object. but it looks great tho.
I like the series of water drops. my favorite photo is the big leaf. The grass photo turned out kind of blurry. Good job, i really like the focus on the water.
ReplyDeleteI really like the way that the pictures look. The water droplets look really cool against the apple and i like how you used macro to get the perfect picture. The quality of the pictures look really good too. My favorite picture was the one of the apple because i really liked the colors and the way that the water looked on the apple. I thought the black background looked really good too!
ReplyDeleteWhat is the visual idea? you need to be able to describe your concentration with terms that relate to visual ideas. The photos are well composed and work well, but you didn't take any risks with the photos. 40/50
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